I've started rewriting Chapter One. Hurray! Once I have a few chapters done I'll post the first one here to get some feedback, and if anyone's interested in being a test reader, I'll give them the next chapters as I write them.

The first rough draft of what I'm referring to at the moment as "Supers" is done!!! I'm currently making revisions to the printed manuscript and my hands are smudged with colorful pen ink. It's fun to go back and re-read what I wrote. Did I say fun? I mean excruciating. This is crap. Everything needs to be rewritten.
Anyway, once I'm on to the second draft I'll be looking for beta readers to give me feedback, but more on that later.